Cool Water
On the beach.  Sand between my toes.

Cool sand, every grain distinct.  Soft sand.

Light gray sky.  Solid sky hiding the sun.

Cool breeze, fresh and clean.  Refreshing.

Blue-green ocean.  Waves flow over my feet.

Cool waves, gentle and friendly.  Feels good.

My sweet love.  Walking beside me.

Warm heart, smiling and caring.  Together.
I like the structure of this one.