It shatters me, but matters to me
to feel the chill upon my face
like the days we stood
and smiled at each other in the rain

You stood away from me
like a stray of me
like a ghost you were so still
a blur behind a crystal wall
but I always saw you smiling through the rain

It shatters me, but it matters to me
to feel the chill upon my face
standing still through every storm
trying to see you smiling in the rain

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